Planets

                       

in inquiry I have been learning about planets and how to Remember the orders the planets go in .

                                                         This is how you do it
                                                                 Step one ?



                                                          My           ➡️Mercury
                                                         Very          ➡️Venues
                                                         Excited      ➡️Earth
                                                         Mum          ➡️Mars
                                                         Just            ➡️Jupiter
                                                         Surved       ➡️Satune
                                                         Us              ➡️Uranus
                                                         Noddles     ➡️Neptune

                            

Writing week 10

WALT  Plan a recount step by step


I learned that its more easy to write in paragraphs then to just write casually underneath each other. I set out the recount in order, so when some people will read my recount will know that its in order
and when, why, who, who and where it happened. My next step is to set my paragraphs out better then I have

 

Te Teo

Walt learn new word in Maori 

Today for SRL I did Te Teo I took a photo of myself . 

My next step is to be able to say it more confidently. 

WALT  recraft boring sentences and turn them into intresting sentences using descriptive language.

I learned that if you put descriptive words in your sentences they become more interesting to read. 

My next step is to make my sentences longer so it will be better to read.  I also need to put more descriptive words into my sentences so that my work will be more interesting for the person who is reading it.

Ava's words

W.A.L.T word work we are learning to spell new words correctly.

minutes, minutes, minutes, minutes, minutes

my mum said hold on for a couple of minutes till I could have something to eat.

my mum said hold on for a couple of minutes till I could have something to eat. 

SRL work on words

We are learning to spell new words correctly 

When i rote This word I realised that I missed the t in the word pitched.

My next step next week is to rewrite this word with the letter t in it.